Ideas and comments and criticism welcomed. please give me feedback so i can get better.

thanks

About me:
Michael: Floundering artist and abnocious wino destined for greatness or possibly a bad liver and a part time job as a painter and decorator. Torn from my southern roots at the tender age of 3, I was soon stitched into the less than wondrous seams of Skelmersdale (home of the largest roundabout in Europe) where I went to a school run by hippies. When not being rained on in a variety of suburban locations, my youth was miss spent climbing, running, jumping, and ducking the pixelated monstrosities of various now antiquated machines. After a year of work and a super-inter-continental excursion, I settled in Manchester, got a job in a cinema and took up studies in ‘design and art direction’ which brings us more or less up to date.